CL 3/31

Inside of Julie’s paper I was able to find that she used a direct quote. The writer’s last name is brown. In this the quote talks about how even though the average household size has increased a lot, the average occupants for them has actually decreased almost a full person. The next thing I noticed from reading, she used a paraphrase in the second paragraph by calling the mansions something else. Lastly she quoted from the book “How to Build”. In it, it talks about how much wood is actually wasted when it goes into building houses and such structures. Not only do they waste a lot of wood at the warehouse but a decent sum of the wood that’s meant for the structure isn’t actually needed. Personally, I like that she’s adding quotes from the primary source and also how she adds quotes with facts inside them in order to get her argument across.

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